Sunday, June 2, 2013

I have come so far before I couldn't even read or understand English well. Now I'm more confident I've started writing some poems. I've posted on Poetry.com and I've gotten some reviews too. Here's two of my poems. I have more on Poetry.com.


 
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by Zack Pene
i stand not because she needs me but because i need her. My purpose my one, my hope no joke. she brought peace and something more. That is why i stand with her. My meaning, my beacon for my lost ship. My vision is blurring, my arms and legs are heavy and i am fading, fading, but then she stands with me and that is all i need. I dont need the world to like me just her. Her.. and her name is ..............
 
 
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you like teal, thats what you said. does that mean you feel because i like red.

you like animals, so do but i am one so thats just bias.

 i dont understand you so tell me why you are my lady so said   

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